.044 - "little yuri" now online for your criticizing pleasure

During my stay in Japan, I had the opportunity to do my first short film in Japanese. Below is the film.

Man....just watching this really makes me wanna be back there so much. The friends that I made in the Doshisha University Film Club were not only talented, but also very kind-hearted and patient especially considering that I could rarely communicate clearly with them... Also, the film definitely wouldn't have happened had it not been for my friend Toshi. He was the DP(cinematographer) and translated my entire English script into Japanese in a weekend!

Please let me know what you think about the film.